writing blog post

Hello everybody,

its Brooklyn back here with a blog post about my writing


we are learning to use language features in our writing and action word's


29-10-2019

“Yes” I was sliding back into the dream. I was building a time machine so I could go back and win the lotto but then I realised I could prevent hitler I could prevent all of the war’s.

 I was telling all of my family to come all my cousins , aunty's , uncles I told them we can all win all of the lottos and be the richest family ever.

I set up the machine i put in one year then pressed the button to go then I just noticed I put in year one! I tried to open the door it didn't work my family was excited to be rich then I told them there was a change of plans  they all groaned and moaned I told them we were going to year one like when the dinosaurs were around they started freaking out by trying to escape the time machine the were running all over the place. Hitting the walls screaming “help!” but I was telling them you will never get out until we stop i made it so it never opens when we’re travelling in time when we stopped.

 we walked outside we were getting eaten by a t-rex the t-rex picked up the time machine thinking we were in it it took it to a cliff and dropped it so we had no way to get home we had to survive like Tarzan did. I was telling them we needed to find shelter so we can keep warm at night and so we don’t freeze to death.

Me and my cousin were just going for a walk and we saw some eggs but then we saw a t-rex sit them. So we had to get the t-rex to move then big chungus came and ate the t-rex. So me and my cousin were like “thanks big chungus” When big chungus left we took the eggs and took them home to eat. But then when we were cooking one of the eggs and the other egg was hatching now we have a pet t-rex as he grew up he was growing stronger. to be continued

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Brooklyn.