No fidget spinners
I am choosing to go against fidget spinners
No fidget spinners allowed because they get you into trouble on the mat and when you are doing your work on the chromebook.on the mat you play with your fidget spinner then you do not know what to do when it’s work time.
No fidget spinners because you could be waiting for the screen to load you mite drop it on your chromebook
No fidget spinners because you could be looking around the classroom than you will get in trouble on the mat and on the tables on the chromebooks.
The fidget spinners were made in 2017 they are really annoying people that don’t have fidget spinners they moyne about not having one and they are just toys and plus they don’t do much they only cause trouble with kids
When they give there friends a turn then they dont give it back then your friends will not be friends until they give there fidget spinners back.
i hope this has convinced you?
Hi Brooklyn,
ReplyDeleteI like the way you have organised your story into paragraphs and how you stated your opinion about Fidget Spinners. Next time maybe you could read your work over and try to come up with more interesting words to replace 'no fidget spinners'.
Hi Brooklyn ,
ReplyDeleteI really like your story your information is spread out really well . Next time maybe you could double check your information sources as some of it could be wrong . However I do like how you added in something about Chromebook safety
Hi Brooklyn,
ReplyDeleteI like the way you have organised your story into paragraphs and how you stated your opinion about Fidget Spinners. Next time maybe you could read your work over and try to come up with more interesting words to replace 'no fidget spinners'
hey brooklyn
ReplyDeletethis convinsed me
i agree with you because they are nosie
anyway bye bye